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    6/16/2009

    Serenity

    Under the dawn, I sit in my boat,
    Whatever I see, I think of you.
    Amidst the cold mist, I clutch my coat.
    Whenever I sleep, I dream of you.

    Is it fate that made us meet?
    Were all your words just a hoax?
    It's a lie that I would cheat.
    From my mouth then they were jokes.

    All I have now is silence.
    Even a whisper would sting.
    To me, your words are violent.
    More painful than losing the ring.

    In this silence, I lack love,
    I need care, not staring eyes.
    I dream of a lovely dove.
    I can only hope it's nigh.

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    Peter Liaowrote:
    Thanks.
    Yes I wrote every of these poems, unless I wrote an author's name at the bottom.
    June 20
    kokowrote:
    its not emo.
    its beautiful
    June 19
    Ninawrote:
    so sad and emo....did u rite it?
    June 18

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